We had to make a post card about what we did in the Holiday
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HI Tanner I really like you blog post
ReplyDeleteI also went to time zone you should fix
the spelling of bumper car.
Hi Tanner, l really like your post card that you did. Maybe next time you should read your work before you post. Good job.
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ReplyDeleteHi tanner,
ReplyDeleteI see that you have made a postcard to miss Agnew about going to Time zone.
You also got 400 tickets and that's Amazing. There was a sentence that said'Then we went to see are tickets' make sure you read your blog before posting but its a mistake. Also the activities that you did is Awesome and you did bumper cars, I like doing bumper cars because I like steering the wheel.
Hi Tanner
ReplyDeleteI love that you have described to Miss Agnew how you won your tickets at Timezone. Timezone is one of Tane's favourite places to go as well.
What did you get with your 2000 tickets?
Thanks - Mel (T/A)
Kia ora Tanner,
ReplyDeleteIt sounded like you had a wonderful time at Timezone. I also like Timezone myself. What would be your favourite Timezone activity/game? Maybe next time you could use a different font that is not all in capital letters to make it easier to read for us readers? I really enjoyed hearing what you did at timezone. I look forward to hearing about what you get up to during the lockdown. Well done Tanner.
Ms Lap